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Thesis / theme-said-aloud
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Plain English: Your theme is what the book is about underneath (here: the cost of knowing, consciousness-based reality). A thesis statement is the bad habit of having a character or narrator say the theme out loud. Theme should be embodied in choices, not announced.
In this project: A named failure mode the engine hunts — "the climax is a forty-page thesis." There's a tool that ranks thesis-like sentences for cutting.
See: craft/../doctrine.html ("embody, don't state") · storygraph/prose_thesis.py · academic/craft/relic-20260602T1157.md
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