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The telling detail / specificity

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Plain English: One precise, concrete, slightly unexpected detail does more than a pile of adjectives. The specific (the "first train-coupling device") beats the generic ("a revolutionary invention"). Concrete nouns and strong verbs over abstraction and modifiers.

Rule: Choose the one detail that implies the rest; let it carry weight. Prefer the strong verb to verb-plus-adverb, the exact noun to noun-plus-adjective.

Fail: Generic abstraction and "stock" imagery (LLMs default here — replacing the specific with the smoothly generic). Also adjective/adverb pile-up masquerading as richness.

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